MrNumbers's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Fireworks loop]

Beautiful

I can't give this a ten, as much as I want to, because there's no content past the loop. But you've done that so well. The music was perfectly chosen, the wind was artfully sculpted and the fireworks were nice. It wasn't interrupted by the loud bangs that accompany fireworks, which is a positive and a negative (It might have killed the mood unless done really well, but the fireworks were a bit hollower).

I really hope to see more from you. Don't let a single negative review here bring you down. Take their advice, but don't take it too seriously.

You have a gift. Share it with the world, and the world shall praise you. Beautiful work.

shrizumalonito responds:

Thank you. I appreciate your review.

[STWPT Compilation]

Did you get permission?

As long as you got permission. Seriously, the 'songs' you chose weren't the best, the animation was random, but good in a way because of it. Needs a lot of improvement.

I may flag this for stolen audio though.

SirReginald responds:

EDIT: he now has one of these animations on his youtube (the artist) as the semi-official music video. so yeah i pretty much have permission.

[What In The Box?]

Haha

I honestly laughed for most of these. Short, but with a decent amount of options.

My favourite, for reasons even I don't understand was grass. I just hate mowing the lawn I guess.

We all know what you need to improve on. I just want to say i hoe you improve with time!

jay37 responds:

you mean hope right lol '). thank for the feeback.

[How Are You Now?]

*Tear*

I'm in tears. So bittersweet.
Watch this flash...
:'-)

Ni hao. Wo shi Audaliaren. Vote 5!

[Chibipons]

It is an honor.

It is an honor to view this flash at this stage. It is complex in it's simplicity and genuinely fun and happy to watch. However I have to mark you down for some blatant errors that should honestly have been edited out.

The spelling, syntax and grammar errors were numerous and hinestly glaring. The message was lost in some of the errors, it wasn't just, huh wrong there, it's huh, that sentence should have ended three words ago.

This is too wide. The edges of your animation aren't covered by effects, a bit of an oops that hammers home your watching something someone did, not something that is. I really lost myself in your world, but then a scene transition would happen and it's like someone poured coffee on my book, if you know what I mean. It stops being a story and starts being a book.

Amazing work, dumb errors and I hope that if you fix them this gets front page.

[diran-smoking kills]

First flash?

I give this a 6 (I did vote 4 to float your score a bit, though, cause I'd hate to see this blammed) because I laughed. The facial movement was excellent.

Pros: Funny, well drawn (Except for the end

Con: poorly animated (especially the character blacking out at the end.

Do better next time, and I really mean that. Not because this was bad, but because I really want to see more from you. This is better than the first eddsworld flash, and look where he ended up (after a while).

Get a script and you may see consistent 3.0-4.0 ratings! If you actually read this, Diran, drop me a line ;-)

diran94 responds:

thanks for the creative critisism, though technicaly my first, this is just a short while i'm working on larger projects